I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Monday 30 August 2021
List Poem
LI: To write a list poem that describes a topic by painting a picture with your words.
Today we wrote list poems about a topic we connected with. Our challenge was to use desacriptive language features to paint a clear picture with our words.
Hi Ariana I loved reading your list poem. The second line describing the spiders paper thin legs really gave me a clear vision of them climbing through the window. This was great use of descriptive writing. I also like how you described why the dark intimidates you the most and have to agree with your reason why,I think you also ended your poem with a powerful line, stating that fear can be overcome. Awesome work
Hi Ariana
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your list poem. The second line describing the spiders paper thin legs really gave me a clear vision of them climbing through the window. This was great use of descriptive writing. I also like how you described why the dark intimidates you the most and have to agree with your reason why,I think you also ended your poem with a powerful line, stating that fear can be overcome.
Awesome work