Envy

 LI: To edit our writing using DRAFT

An abstract noun is something that can’t be physically touched, as in a feeling (Happiness, fear, love, etc.

This week LS2 have been learning about Metaphors and Abstract Nouns.  

This poem has been created by me and my  pair,  for this poem we were asked to use DRAFT(Delete, , Rearrange, Add, Fix, Talk) in our poem. 

We used the 5 senses(Smell, hear, taste, feel and see), Punctuation, .)& Complex( it when u add 2 ideas together, and one idea doesn't make sense without the other idea)Sentences